Thank you for your work. Though this very clearly still needs more time in the oven. I'm glad to see you have more hands on deck now but there's still a lot of obvious mistakes and very strange wordings. I suggest you take a bit more time ironing out the details before you ship these out Wishing y'all the best

It would be helpful if, from time to time, people pointed out what those "obvious mistakes" and "very strange wordings" are, so that I could learn from them and avoid making them again. Anyway, thanks for checking out my translation. I really try to put in as much effort as I can.

No problem, hang in there. And those mistakes, with all due respect, is for you and your team to figure out :) But here's a couple I found this episode, - 10:32 "What happened to his face?" (Yuna is talking directly to Tatsuomi. It should be 'your face') - 10:34 "It was an oversight." (The word 'oversight' doesn't quite work in this context) - 15:22 "Sae and you go back." (Since she's referring to Sae directly first, instead of 'Sae and you' it should be either 'You two', 'You and your brother' or something along those lines) - 18:14 "Can't they come back?" (This is Otosumi expressing shock at what Tigre just said. It should be 'They can't come back?') - 20:41 "I don't care about the damn justice!" (Awkward wording. You don't need 'the' in that line) - 20:59 "This was the most fun I'd had fighting in ages." (Grammar mistake. It should be 'I've had') - 21:41 "Stop messing with my things!" (Just confusing. What is 'my things' supposed to refer to here?) - 22:30 "We failed our promised." (Typo. But also an awkward phrasing. You don't 'fail a promise'. It's usually 'fail to keep a promise') - Also you're consistently gendering the monster using he/him pronouns. While it's not outright wrong, it just feels off when the monster is more akin to an animal There are other mistakes but they'd require more from me to fully explain. I will just leave you with these. Good luck with future episodes